Let’s a go. Finally my dudes the continuation that we’ve all been waiting for even though its a reboot it’s still a continuation is here. I guess you could say that I was rattled when I found out about this bad boy.😏

... i dont know if trust charlottes anymore... he has dropped about 10 stories now

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Not a lot to complain about, since there is not a lot of stories that feature new things using existing characters I don't get what I am saying Hello

first review from me. yay. anyway i liked your previous story. i have high hopes that this reboot is way better. so looking forward to it. i gotta say though nice beginning. i will change my review after decent number of chapters .

I was really enjoying it, but the author started adding too much stuff, the other stories were almost completely forgotten (As far as I've read), where's Komi? to Saki? what happened to lumine? the author just keeps adding more things and making the story more messy and boring, and with the addition of the Fateverse in the main world, for me it ended everything, although I like Fate I don't remember any fanfic that a crossover with him gave right (Google Translate)

While its good, my main issue i just how directionless it is. It was more prominent wgen you introduced Lumine of all people. It would have been a lot better of a start of the story if it stuck with Komi and Saki since they are schoolmates and not some otherworldly person. Lumine's not even central in forcing some sort of plot like what Rukia did to Ichigo where her arrival kickstarted pretty much everything. It jist felt random not Bizarre as even Jojo had a direction of the story.

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Welp.. There's nothing really to say but Great Story for a fic....... It only lacks word count I think... I hope it improves moreee!!. .......