Review Detail of Boogada23456 in High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms

So far this is a very good fanfic with very little problems. Like the fact that every time the story moves forward it stagnates in place for a little to long, killing the anticipation from previous chapters builds up. As well as the mc not really having a goal in this novel, mainly because you have written him as an in the now type of guy. Also kinda having his personality and motivations scattered all over the place, and just as a reminder becoming the strongest is a fact in this novel, not a goal anyways you are doing really good keep it up.