Review Detail of The_Fallen_Eroge in High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms

Item: High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

The_Fallen_ErogeLv51yrThe_Fallen_Eroge

Ttory seems to be promising, the background had been laid properly, and paragraph looks great and readable. But, I'm kinda confused with the reasoning behind chapter 4. I see no merit for that irrational decisions, it's more like you're trying to put a banner with the signage of "Please don't read my book". It kinda defeat the purpose of reincarnation and the element of surprise in it. But then again, it's your work and creativity. Feel free to do some trial and error that satisfy the majority of the readers. Reasoning: 1. MC1 died and reincarnated into the body of MC2, MC1 Fade away from existance leaving only his wisdom and experience to MC1. -Suggestion, Just merge their souls and do some BS in it, or possibly make MC1 the bankai of MC2. 2.MC2 decided to spill that he received the memories from MC1 into his family. -Suggestion would be: just shut up.

High School DxD: Scattered Cherry Blossoms

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Replies8

_AlenkarLv3_Alenkar

this spoils the immersion, I know that the author tries to create some kind of realism for the protagonist... but what does he gain by talking about past lives? he should live his own life, this kind of knowledge is barely his business, much less for strangers or relatives

1yr

GhoulDragoLv1GhoulDrago

The later chapters show that the author just isn't going for an isekai but rather, a fanfic with various crossovers from other stories. (Currently I can recognise devil may cry and bleach , some other stuff is published by mc as manga) (In case anyone reads your review)

1yr

The_Fallen_ErogeLv5The_Fallen_Eroge

Interesting

GhoulDrago:The later chapters show that the author just isn't going for an isekai but rather, a fanfic with various crossovers from other stories. (Currently I can recognise devil may cry and bleach , some other stuff is published by mc as manga) (In case anyone reads your review)

1yr

adam_coperLv1adam_coper

why add many great heriones if they wont end in his harem

1yr

Grover_5242Lv4Grover_5242

Man the woman in the harem are bi

1yr

mowLv4mow

So theres yuri I take it?

Grover_5242:Man the woman in the harem are bi

1yr

ArkCrowLv3ArkCrow

For real ?

Grover_5242:Man the woman in the harem are bi

11mth

Angel_WhisLv13Angel_Whis

mc is six years old and he is immature, so he told his memories to his family. although he experienced the life of mc1 like a dream that doesn't make him experience the life in reality. it's like how you watch a movie.

10mth