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Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv151yr
2023-05-08 10:59

I made it to chapter 380, but for me I just can't continue. The writing is good, but someone early complained about author using names instead of pronouns, and they obliged. However author should have kept with names as the use of pronouns is wrong about 95% of the time. The MC is ok and is essentially along for the ride as all the girls around him are like that Noob in a MMORPG who accidentally pulls the boss when your trying clear the room every raid/dungeon. The girls bring all the trouble to the MC and so far pretty much the MC is not strong enough to take them on and has to be protected.. But then the women tell him he needs to get stronger (the ones targeting are 3-5 realms!! higher than him). Liang Xi is the worst of the bunch as she always complains about him needing focus on cultivation and getting stronger, but is also the one throwing all these troublesome women at him like she is feeding the birds.. This is on story I actually sympathize with the MC as every one around him just makes his life a CLUSTER $*@)!...He can't cultivate for more than a couple hours as he is either Banging all these women or is in a situation out of his control.. I could continue if the MC would just finally snap at Liang Xi with the cold hard truth from above.. But unfortunately we get "I need to get stronger.", "you need to be serious and get stronger." every other chapter.

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JosieGan
JosieGanAuthor

If you don't mind, you can give it another chance. He changed a lot not, but idk if his changes will suit your taste. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13

Banging is cultivation…are you okay?

Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

Evidently you didn't understand the concept of he still needs to balance the Yin with Yang, which he has to cultivate on his own. That is one thing that is ignored honestly, as he has so much Yin by ch 300s he is so far out of balance it isn't funny.

DaoistArbore:Banging is cultivation…are you okay?
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