Hello readers! I hope you're all doing well. This is my second piece of writing, and I'd love to know what you think of it. I'll wait for your recommendations. HAVE A GOOD DAY! 🙂

Maybe this is too early for a review since there is only one chapter. But this story definitely have potential. I will keep reading and keep the spirits high author.

Although it is just one chapter but still l cane here to encourege the author for her work.... It is very well written and the world background is also pretty good.... Overall its going to be a great story l guess... Waiting for the next chapters 😜😜

Finally something interesting to read with new concept and it can easily hook up my interest.I usually don't read novel that are not interesting enough to hook me up in first few chapters. Thanks for the novel😘😘😘. I was reading it and noticed that she used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language. Love the story so far, thanks.

Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library. 😍

Overall the idea of your novel is good, I like all the characters, I like the mansion and the way you added grey color enhanced its beauty .Best of luck😇

let me just start with read This!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 There's only a few books in my life that have ever caught my attention and this is the best one ! I love the characters and how the author describes them❤❤❤keep it up Author

amazing plot with many spoiled males 🤣🤣 they sure need to be brought down a peg. I enjoyed to book so far and can't wait to continue with new chapters. :) there are a few grammar mistakes but book is still readable nicely. 😁😁 well done author. recomending it to anyone 😁❤

The words are arranged in such a way that it is very easy to understand,Keep writing like this, I want to read further, it will be quite interesting.😊

Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)