This has to be my favourite start to a fanfic on this site. It seems the writer is planning to write a big novel and has laid out some groundwork for interesting future villains. I will try and breakdown why I think each section deserves 5 stars. Writing quality: The writer has no grammar issues at all and is amazing at making me picture each scene in my head. Updating stability: Although they have been absent for 2 weeks. They have given a valid reason and so far it seems to be a one off instance. Story development: I think the story is developing in a very fluid manner with over a thousand words per chapter. Additionally, It’s respecting the source material whilst being unique. Character design: The original characters have depth to them and the ”Voices” of the show characters seem to be accurate so far. I also appreciate that the author is taking their time to do the characters justice. World background: The author does a great job of describing the life and world of the OC character ( maybe too well as we only get to the boys universe in chapter 3). The way they describe each scene also helps me to fully envision the world. This is truly a great fanfic and I look forward to seeing what more this author has to bring.
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