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Venyon
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2022-10-25 11:35

Writing Quality: 4 Stars. - Pretty decent and has a few grammatical errors but it's tolerable. Story Development: 3 Stars - I must admit that I am quite biased and have a massive prejudice against the Harem genre, but this one is an exception. Although I don't have that much expectations, it still has good pacing and is not rushed. Character Design: 3 Stars - I'm not really a fan of mentally-challenged main characters, especially those who take Pride and Arrogance to a new level to the point that it's just ridiculous. So far, the mc has those tendencies at bay, but I'm sure it'll happen soon. Updating Stability: 4 Stars - It's alright. World Background: 4 Stars - Author did this one some justice, at least. Overall: It's a good FanFic that has your typical hot-blooded Mc that has an overwhelming sense of pride (Like Gilgamesh), but I don't blame him. It's a decent story, I guess.

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