Review Detail of AllFatherOmnis in Wrath of a Sister

I have to say that this is one of the first let's say romantic stories I've read and I wasn't expecting much from it. (I'm a fantasy person after all) but I was wrong. I may have only read one chapter, but I was intrigued. Too much, in fact. Anyway, I'm throwing it in collections, and will start reading it. Nice work.