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Zuesofolypus
ZuesofolypusLv141yrZuesofolypus

This is messed up in many ways, 1st your grammer is terrible it is not Goku would got to school it is Goku went to school, then you are just rushing the story as well.

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What if goku was in highschool dxd

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Greater_OatAuthorGreater_Oat

Or maybe I have a life or get this. This may boggle you even more the writing gets better

haremphobic:You just suck at writingšŸ˜‚
Greater_Oat
Greater_OatAuthorGreater_Oat

also I'm not trying to into depth with everything or I'd be touring myself also I went like 3 episode in 12 chapters then like 6 chapter for 2 episode. I am rushing because I'm not trying to spend ten chapter on one episode

haremphobic
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You just suck at writingšŸ˜‚

Greater_Oat:also I'm not trying to into depth with everything or I'd be touring myself also I went like 3 episode in 12 chapters then like 6 chapter for 2 episode. I am rushing because I'm not trying to spend ten chapter on one episode