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2022-12-11 15:18

It is so beautifully written that i am left in awe. I truly admire your skills of writing a story with such a flow. The story is great and intriguing. The subtle touch of curiosity makes it even more beautiful. The descriptions, the characters, every thing is cool! keep up the good work author!

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Thank you so much! I appreciate your take on this. ❤️

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