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The_Sweet_Sparrow
The_Sweet_SparrowLv142yr
2022-11-22 06:45

This is a well thought out story, It flows well when reading. The grammar is good and no redundancy. I have enjoyed the novel so far. Looking forward to future updates.

A Lady Does It Better

QueenFrieza
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QueenFrieza
QueenFriezaAuthor

An idea 10 years in the making I've only just recently had the courage to publish... I am dedicated to seeing this novel through to the end. Characters I can visualize in my head, I hope I portray them in a way that you can, too. I'm rusty in this type of writing and hope that this novel will give me the chance to be better. I know there are grammar mistakes here and there, but I hope you feel immersed and enjoy the story as much as I do. Stay tuned to see what a lady does better!

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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv15

What an excellent story that I can’t manage to put down. The story is well developed, the characters are an interesting bunch, each with their own uniqueness and QueenFrieza does an amazing job bringing them to life. The world is portrayed beautifully as we follow Varya as she is taken captive and begins to find her way through her struggles and finds herself in a vastly different world than she knew. Chapters are consistently updated daily and I only wish I could get more of the story. A bombshell novel that won’t disappoint!

2yr
yadayada200028
yadayada200028Lv2

This is a true gem. The synopsis and the cover doesn't do justice to it though, I suggest you update it to give it more traction.

2yr
Sunny_Shumail
Sunny_ShumailLv14

Honestly, I am in love with this book. It's hard to find good books with aliens. The writer is doing a commendable job of portraying the characters, especially the big bad gives you proper chills like he is supposed to. The world-building is top-notch and updates are stable. Definitely worth reading. 😍

2yr
Kirito_K5
Kirito_K5Lv13

Pretty good, to bad it's not get the attention it deserves, good work

2yr
Livylivalive
LivylivaliveLv11

There is so much more to the book than the cover let’s on. The plot is simply intriguing, and piques your curiousity with where it might be going. Romance is visible from the start, and not forced but natural. The description is simply awesome and elaborate, I guarantee you’ll get story immersion. In search of a quality story with romance, sci-fi and plot- this is for you!

2yr
Kandro
KandroLv3

Deep and profound thought lies here. So much letters that make up the words of this wonderful work. Lady inded did it MUCH better than I ever could expect her to do. You must read this, I command you.

2yr
Bunny_Bunny_3876
Bunny_Bunny_3876Lv15

Very impressive novel! It is well written and has an excellent story line. Easy to follow and I’m looking forward to future posts.❤️

2yr
CetusWritings
CetusWritingsLv3

Just after reading a few chapters I can say that the author is definitely well versed with their words since they've used many unique words in their writings and their story is very unique since I haven't seen anything like it and the way the author describes the actions and emotions of the novel are definitely good as well all I can say it's a pretty good read if you want to try it yourself.

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