Story itself has a good promise, it's a new setting overall. The character design and the world exploration needs further development. Still some grammatical errors and some sentences are quite awkward. But I'm quite enjoying the story telling, so overall a good read for me.

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No typical young master s*it so far and I hope author will continue the same in his future updates. Nedd more more..................................................................................................................................................

I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good. The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now 👍

Hello everyone! Thanks for your support so far. I will try to give my best with this book and also I will try to update as much as possible. If there is anything that you point out abou the story or character design or any other things, please let me know. One last thing, I still need to edit some chapters , I will try to edit them as soon as possible.

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Goody story, slow development of some characters and kind of feels that author left out some characters. But its only been 10 or so days in the world so far. I'm expecting author to give every important characters some SCREEN TIME too. I recommend this to anyone who are interested in a modern novel, with system and a sect based one at that.

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Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰

The story so far interesting as it uses the two concepts in one. The world building is done very good and as for the character they are developed well. so yes it's worth reading as the story is unique. as for cons- the start is a little slow but if you can go a few chaps in you will be hooked :)