Starts out just fine. Very generic, but fine. Very little is known about MC's personality and motivations for some of his actions, before he makes the biggest impression on the reader at around chapter 20: of being an absolute idiot and a wimp. He does this by revealing everything about his transmigration and perks he got from it. And then getting faux?-blackmailed(btw of false sexual assault allegations) by his sister. As for breaking down some wall between them, I call bullshit. At the very least I simply cannot sympathize with it and the author took no effort to ensure anyone would either. Or maybe he did and it just went over my head.
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