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Herohero
HeroheroLv42yr
2022-10-07 03:47

the author wants an opinion so I will give one even if I think it may be early. I find that the story is a bit slow and the Mc lacks ambition or objective enlightens him, and he has the same flaw as Rimuru (he relies too much on Raphaël), and for the quality of writing , I will say it's not garbage but not perfect (I will say it's 7/10 or 8/10) but I think the idea of ​​the fanfic is incredible and the skills the Mc has are incredible so I recommend it to you

Brand New Life In Naruto World

ku_zu
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ku_zu
ku_zuAuthor

Heh! Imma just leave dat full 5 star over here.This is my first novel so leave your views on this novel if you are free.Enjoy my work guys.😁😁😁😁😁

2yr

Nasty_yogurt
Nasty_yogurtLv14

Author-sama said leave a review so here I am. I say book = good. Mc a woman, woman is cool. Read book or die. itsa good book, tensura is fun naruto is cool

2yr
david_cuenca
david_cuencaLv2

this seems interesting hehe, I hope it gets updated every day that would be good, by the way I hope you don't prolong its childhood too much and that the canon begins, which is more inrt ahh and the best possible Couples are Tsunade, shizune, anko, kaguya , Oh also Sakura and ino and try since the poor thing needs more love hehe ahh and Conan hehe

2yr
FrunT
FrunTLv10

Love the book, Love you keep up the good work.😁

2yr
Bluedragon20
Bluedragon20Lv2

Loving this story already cannot wait to read more and see what happens in future chapters!!

2yr
Lyagushka0
Lyagushka0Lv1

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2yr
Int_Ink
Int_InkLv1

Awalnya bagus, namun anda terlalu cepat dalam berhubungan dengan hinata, dan MC cukup tak tahu malu yang merasa itu wajar ketika dia berkata hal-hal seperti hubungan di usianya, padahal itu terlihat cringe. Apalagi dengan hubungan sesama jenis yang seolah-olah itu wajar bagi dunia tersebut. Saya bahkan tidak berani memikirkan hal cringe apa yang akan terjadi di masa depan jika terus seperti ini. Mc bahkan mencoba membantu naruto seolah-olah dia adalah kerabatnya padahal dia baru saja bertemu. Apa menurutmu itu wajar?? Kesimpulannya, penulis kurang memahami hubungan, antara karakter utama dan yang lainnya, tidak ada rasa penolakan di setiap dialognya, seolah semua yang dikatakan Mc adalah benar. Karakter lain tampak seperti NPC yang dengan mudah di atur oleh mc melalui percakapan. Bahkan ada perasaan narsisis pada MC nya yang membuat itu menjadi lebih aneh ketika digabungkan. Pertimbangkan lagi pengembangan setiap karakter, karena itu tidak semudah yang anda pikirkan. Saya hanya akan menilai sesuai apa yang saya lihat (Indonesian) Itu adalah sedikit ulasan dari saya Sekian dan terima kasih😁

2yr
TATTERWING
TATTERWINGLv15

so far so good keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

2yr
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