I tried to read it but mc personality is just not for me he doesn't carry his self like a king after he got the memories the girls run all over him hate to use this word but he's like a king simp back to the story was ok in hotd but ruby arc just went down the hill girls where like uncontrollable kids I feel like I'm bashing rn but that's how I see it any why the wired Nicknames I was ok with cub but mo Lana or what ever it was was just wired
DualCultivator69
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LIKEthe story isn't bad you just need better character development for most of the main cast even takashi is a much better character compare to the mc
DualCultivator69:i as the author agree the mc is a trash beta passif simp bro
Lordmoonlight:the story isn't bad you just need better character development for most of the main cast even takashi is a much better character compare to the mc
Look at the authors past comments and look at the comments now and look at the people's comments defending him
Lordmoonlight:how sure are you he did say he moved it from fanfiction to this site