Review Detail of Priest_Yuri in Jujutsu Kaisen: To Ashes
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Hum for opinion: I really appreciate the OC and the fact that the mc was a man in his life to then pass a woman I find her rather good // Grammar: 4 stars (not perfect but really quite good // Characterization :4.5 stars // World build: 0/0 (it's a fanfic so I can't really rate) // Something else like romance ext I don't know as it wasn't explained but I prefer yuri to make more sense 4.25 = 4 stars Good luck for the future and good start ;) /////// Google Trans/////
Jujutsu Kaisen: To Ashes
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Hmm sometimes I get confused while reading but it's not that bad I don't know where exactly but I remember places where I don't know who is talking to whom but otherwise it's really a minor issue so no need to looking for nothing is perfect after everyone has another vision of perfection me it's for example yuri novels..... /// Google Transl ///
sucroseliker:If you don't mind me asking, are there any grammar errors or does the prose just feel awkward to read?