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TruthOnlyReader
TruthOnlyReaderLv52yr
2022-10-02 12:06

Well written so far, can not wait to see what next. I think you should add the genderbend tag or female MC tag. But I like the writing so far. I have only a couple of female MC stories, as most are trash but this is one of those exception. My only criticism of the story is that, you really gonna make Naoya the older brother, that is a huge downgrade to me. Other than that, keep going!

Jujutsu Kaisen: To Ashes

sucroseliker
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sucroseliker
sucroselikerAuthor

What's wrong with my boy Naoya πŸ˜₯

2yr
TruthOnlyReader
TruthOnlyReaderLv5

Everything

sucroseliker:What's wrong with my boy Naoya πŸ˜₯
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General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3

Bruh

sucroseliker:What's wrong with my boy Naoya πŸ˜₯
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FalseProphet_
FalseProphet_Lv15

My only question is he going to be gay and date guys or stay straight or just no romance at all(which I’d preferred

sucroseliker:What's wrong with my boy Naoya πŸ˜₯
2yr
sucroseliker
sucroselikerAuthor

Its gay either way, like an unsolvable ethical dilemma.

FalseProphet_:My only question is he going to be gay and date guys or stay straight or just no romance at all(which I’d preferred
2yr
FalseProphet_
FalseProphet_Lv15

I mean yea but who doesn’t like lesbiand

sucroseliker:Its gay either way, like an unsolvable ethical dilemma.
2yr
BaaSheep123
BaaSheep123Lv5

MC's preference? Personally I enjoy yuri more, BUT, I would not mind if the love interest was male.

sucroseliker:Its gay either way, like an unsolvable ethical dilemma.
2yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

was a gay man and became a woman? or is yuri

2yr
TruthOnlyReader
TruthOnlyReaderLv5

Basically a man becomes a women and he likes women

Haku_Ouroboros:was a gay man and became a woman? or is yuri
2yr
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Thx

TruthOnlyReader:Basically a man becomes a women and he likes women
2yr
Other Reviews
Ginshiro_Jigoku
Ginshiro_JigokuLv1

Im really enjoying this fan fic. I like the relationship between Naoko and Naoya its like bickering siblings in a love hate relationship very nice. I just hope the ship is Yuri

2yr

Deimesu
DeimesuLv4

I'm not a fan of genderbent, but that doesn't mean that ff isn't good. So i just gonna put that review here to support author motivation. You doing great, keep going.

2yr
Priest_Yuri
Priest_YuriLv2

Hum for opinion: I really appreciate the OC and the fact that the mc was a man in his life to then pass a woman I find her rather good // Grammar: 4 stars (not perfect but really quite good // Characterization :4.5 stars // World build: 0/0 (it's a fanfic so I can't really rate) // Something else like romance ext I don't know as it wasn't explained but I prefer yuri to make more sense 4.25 = 4 stars Good luck for the future and good start ;) /////// Google Trans/////

2yr
akari_dragneel
akari_dragneelLv1

I really like the story overall and the progression of the MC, I just hope that you will update soon.

2yr
fathomer364
fathomer364Lv1

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Arcanemissile
ArcanemissileLv12

A well written story author keep it up. My only hope is that the MC is strong/ very strong but not op enough to v1 Gojo or something like that.

2yr
Saber_
Saber_Lv1

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