After reading the first forty chapters, I was ready to shoot the MC in the head again and be done. All of the characters, especially the MC have serious brain problems. From the dad not taking knights when his family is being targeted to the MC going full retard when it comes to starting his schooling, I have given up all hope for the mc. This story is a complete miss and up to chapter forty hasn’t delivered at all on its premise. The author also has problems with repetition and their vocabulary. They frequently repeat the same thing 2-3 times per paragraph just worded slightly different. They use words like saunter, dismount, retort, either incorrectly or in manners which do not match the connotations that cone with those words. Using saunter for almost every single transitional movement, dismount for climbing up and down the stairs, and retort for simple replies.
Jeffson
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