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Review Detail of Degenerate_Panda in Reincarnated With The Undefeated System

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Degenerate_Panda
Degenerate_PandaLv151yrDegenerate_Panda

After reading the first forty chapters, I was ready to shoot the MC in the head again and be done. All of the characters, especially the MC have serious brain problems. From the dad not taking knights when his family is being targeted to the MC going full retard when it comes to starting his schooling, I have given up all hope for the mc. This story is a complete miss and up to chapter forty hasn’t delivered at all on its premise. The author also has problems with repetition and their vocabulary. They frequently repeat the same thing 2-3 times per paragraph just worded slightly different. They use words like saunter, dismount, retort, either incorrectly or in manners which do not match the connotations that cone with those words. Using saunter for almost every single transitional movement, dismount for climbing up and down the stairs, and retort for simple replies.

Reincarnated With The Undefeated System

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DaoistTempest619
DaoistTempest619Lv3DaoistTempest619

Give the guy some slack guys🤭🤭🤭...i think it's enough now, let encourage him to learn from his mistakes

Silver_meteor0418
Silver_meteor0418Lv14Silver_meteor0418

Indeed. what's even more disturbing is that he's encouraging pedophilia here. Not to mention this kid is stupid in all possible ways. I honestly wish the author writes an arc where he loses something or someone important to him so he can grow the fk up already

Golu_Singh_4921
Golu_Singh_4921Lv2Golu_Singh_4921

thank you for good review...helped me save my time

Cosmic
CosmicLv15Cosmic

I agree. I just read that same amount of chapters it has really not delivered well

AtharvaVaidya
AtharvaVaidyaLv3AtharvaVaidya

Nice review 👍

A_Stevenson
A_StevensonLv14A_Stevenson

wow you made it 40 chapters? i quit at like 12...

Nate_Gong
Nate_GongLv12Nate_Gong

couldn't even get past 5.

A_Stevenson:wow you made it 40 chapters? i quit at like 12...
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3Monarch_Lord

lol barely made it to 6th somehow

Nate_Gong:couldn't even get past 5.
Zeus_Kryz2
Zeus_Kryz2Lv12Zeus_Kryz2

thanks for the heads up brother

Gear5th
Gear5thLv12Gear5th

i couldn't even read chapter 1 i thought i might need to see the reviews before reading it

Nate_Gong:couldn't even get past 5.
Magorias
MagoriasLv15Magorias

I couldn't have said it better. The repetition and incorrect connotations get worse the further you read. I suffered until into the 50s. I have given up on this at this point.

Afor_Ken
Afor_KenLv2Afor_Ken

Author San...can you please rewrite the book and change the name maybe the reviews might change...but three books with this one being the only one with 4 power stones...mehnnn keep it up Author...you will make it