Item: Hours Of Darkness
Rating: 4.4
Author: CosmicRuler

CosmicRulerLv32yr

2023-04-12 23:33

You need to work on details and repeating words isn't a good thing because it sounds repetitive be clearer with the world and its background. The first chapter needs some fixing I'm confused remember even if it makes the chapter a bit boring add details. But all that aside its a good book and would definitely recommend and waiting to see more i the future hehehe

Hours Of Darkness

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