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Maryam_Mayo
Maryam_MayoLv12yr
2022-10-04 02:53

I think it's difficult to portray the lives of kings and queens, but you accomplished it admirably. It keeps readers interested and entices them to read more.

The Shadows Between Us

Dreamerx30
4.8
1 Chs

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really? thank you❤️

2yr
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Sigheti
SighetiLv4

You present your reader with a charming story, and a lovable protagonist. You write quite well, although you make some grammar mistakes here and there. It doesn’t really obstruct reading the story, but I think it might polish the story some more. I did try to correct it here and there. It happens quite often that you mix present and past tenses. Overall, a nice story that captures the imagination. Well done!

2yr

Willhem_Duy
Willhem_DuyLv2

A great story, the description was detailed and emasculated. There are a few grammar typos here and there but they wouldn't affect the reading experience so much.

2yr
Lin_Meiling_Reads
Lin_Meiling_ReadsLv1

Wonderful book and great to read, I honestly have to words to give, lol😁😁😁😁😁🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
onedaysomedayy
onedaysomedayyLv11

Beautifully written with an abundance of details and vocabulary. World-building is exceptional, with subtle hints, and exquisite detail. This story is superb and deserves five stars. Can't wait to see how it turns out and hope for more updates soon. Great job!!

2yr
Axel_Ash
Axel_AshLv1

hi, your story title is great, the main idea, I'm pretty sure must be caught the attention of many readers, your plot is strong no doubt, and the arrangements of characters are well.

2yr
Tres_Aguila
Tres_AguilaLv14

I'm given this book a 5-star rating because the author did an incredible job. The synopsis is hypnotic and the first chapter is mind-blowing. The characters design and the world background knowledge of the past era is fantastic. Splendid job author. 👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
Zhoa_Fei
Zhoa_FeiLv13

Initially I was a bit hesitant as the story didn't appear to be my cup of tea, but the synopsis really sucked me in. I decided to give it a chance, and I would keep this in my collection. I would like to see more of the Houses involved. This story has immense potential, so I will be keeping an eye out. I cam see the beauty of shorter chapters as well.

2yr
LegalWolf
LegalWolfLv12

I'll give this novel a 5 star because its story development is catching and after reading the first 2 chapters, I find it interesting. Will need more chapters from the author

2yr
iwaswiththestars
iwaswiththestarsLv3

I am done reading only the first chapter yet I was able to give a review because of the author's extraordinary narration. To be honest, the opening sentence of the story shocked me because I didn't expect the setting to be on the past. It was a good strategy for me since it will hook the readers to read more. Also, how you describe the place was excellent. The Valendia, the royals, the people working there, I can imagine them as I wanted to take a sip of my coffee while reading. 😂 Not all authors possess such a strong imagery as you. However, I suggest some of the paragraphs to be divided since some are long hehe. But overall, it was good. 💗 Keep on writing! I look forward to this book as it was my first time reading a royal romance book in WebNovel. 💖

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