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Jims_Rid
Jims_RidLv42yr
2022-10-11 17:12

The writing quality of this novel is decent. As for the stability of updates, I rate it 4 out of 5 but still good though. Story development is good for a novel that was just beginning. Character design world background are also interesting. The story gives out a unique taste, different from the other typical transmigration novels. Overall, it's a good read

The White-winged transmigrator

funkiller_562
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20 Chs

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Celine_Ona_3325
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goodeygoody
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The way the author conducts this story is masterful, and it deserves recognition based on this fact. Although there are some instances where the grammar and punctuation are a bit iffy, the product is definitely better than most on this platform. From their use of quotes to further mystique to their building of the story’s background and characters, this author displays their writing experience through carefully placed and crafted events that make for a story that I see gaining a huge following in the future. As the novel is still in its early stages, one can follow the journey alongside the author and are sure to be in for a ride.

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funkiller_562
funkiller_562Author

Trying to execute new genres is taxing but fun at the same time. I like trying out new scopes and expressing the power of my imagination to it's full potential. New book, new ideas so let's see where this adventure leads us, shall we? 🥂

2yr
KhyaaL
KhyaaLLv13

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his/her chapters give.

2yr
TrueDawn
TrueDawnLv13

I've only gotten a few chapters in, but it's enough for me to get an idea of what the novel is like. For one, I can say for a fact that the novel's not for someone like me. Nevertheless, the writing of the author, although it still leaves something to be desired, has an alluring charm to it that makes readers want to write more. Though, in terms of world building, from what I've read, aside from the backstory related to Draekai, everything else was haphazardly introduced. It was as if it was added on the spot, rather than being introduced in steps. In any case, if you're into the idea of the MC keeping a vampire as a servant of sorts just so he could do weird stuff, then this novel might be for you. Would definitely do better once it updates again, though.

2yr
SleepyKola
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Just a few chapters, but this will be a great adventure for sure. The writing style is amazing, the descriptions are also on point. The character designs are pretty distinct. Draekai is a little bit uptight, a bit... naive ig? for a vampire who live for centures. Another shocking thing is bodie's character XD didn't expect hin to have a dark sides anyway, overall, this is a good one! thank you for your hard work, keep it up, author-nim!

2yr
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