Review Detail of Winzentwinni in Being Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse Mages
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(Read till chapter 65) I picked this novel up because I'm interested in blind MCs and the synopsis was very intriguing. The story was developing well till chapter 55 but after that there seem to be many chapters missing. There is an obvious time-lapse and unintroduced people, skills and situations pop up. Even the MC had some very plot relevant improvements. I was completely lost in the story without knowing further details. It was really unfortunate because the development seemed interesting. Besides this big flaw there isn't much more to say about the novel. The plot is intriguing but it's not particularly well written. Albeit not bad, there is room for improvement on pacing, details and information and also a bit of grammar problems (tho that could be caused by translation). There are also some big loopholes in when the MC finds out about transmigrating and getting his eye sight back. The world background was unclear as well. It's a fantasy world with magic powers and different races but there were contradicting informations about how developed the different races were. Also I would have loved more information about how the forbidden spells (English) were cast because it was possible to just talk in this languages without having an effect. Unfortunately the potential of the plot wasn't used so I don't recommend you to read further than the pay wall. But the biggest point for not recommending the story is the big missing chunk.
Being Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse Mages
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I got to read it free for 24hours and what bugged me was the changing numbers ..the first 100,000 killed was amazing, but then 300,000 came to be slaughtered "hundreds of thousands killed" still passable. but the next one oh boy! 800,000 gathered, one million arrived and when all the troops were gathered it was 600,000..... and don't get me started about the time jump....more likely a different book. It's like a whole volume was cen.cer.ed
Look at what those bad translations have done to me, I don't even care anymore for wrong or outrageous numbers that got wrongly translated. Or more like they just changed the unit they are measured in from Chinese to its English equivalent without recalculating the value. They often do this with money, weight and even space (like how many square meters a room is), so I didn't even took note of the exaggerated amount of people đ
mujaki2:I got to read it free for 24hours and what bugged me was the changing numbers ..the first 100,000 killed was amazing, but then 300,000 came to be slaughtered "hundreds of thousands killed" still passable. but the next one oh boy! 800,000 gathered, one million arrived and when all the troops were gathered it was 600,000..... and don't get me started about the time jump....more likely a different book. It's like a whole volume was cen.cer.ed
ugh... I made it to 75 before I gave up. the characters have no connection to me anymore. The magic system is a cultivation variant where you awaken skills then draw particles from the air and Crystal's to increase power. The "forbidden mage" angle is completely different (lost) as there are limited spells and they are skills that simply occur- no chant no English. MC barely seems to know three spells-supr nerfed characters. multiple references to a major romance arc that went bad for the MC. Nobody cares that there is a dark elf in the group and in fact she doesn't even seem to be an elf at all. A novel like this is completed after 200 chapters and I've almost read half of it... ......disappointed on my blacklist.
Winzentwinni:Look at what those bad translations have done to me, I don't even care anymore for wrong or outrageous numbers that got wrongly translated. Or more like they just changed the unit they are measured in from Chinese to its English equivalent without recalculating the value. They often do this with money, weight and even space (like how many square meters a room is), so I didn't even took note of the exaggerated amount of people đ