Review Detail of Pancho_Uy in Being Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse Mages

Good concept, but the story is all over the place. Contradictory settings, the characters change their decisions from one paragraph to the other without reason or logic, the MC and the FL don't really communicate with each other. Temporal line is a mess, spacial details are nonexistent. Spoilers ahead. When MC arrives to the elven territory, a barren land where nothing grows, there is a famine ongoing and they are in the brink of death. A couple of years later there are forests, food surplus, and it seems the elves are ready to conquer the world. There are no males but there are children. Less than a thousand. So, how is it? The dialogues are ridiculous. The concept behind magic is ignored and goes unexplained. And this is just the start. I guess the early chapters need to engage the readers fast, but everything here is just sloppy.