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It_Is_Me_Ttt
It_Is_Me_TttLv41yr
2023-04-06 15:31

This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant. My reason; Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out. It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little. For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process. The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story. That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher. That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading 😀

Richest Man: Getting 7 Billion Red Pockets To Start With

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Mayowa_Damilare
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just wanted to inform everyone of this awesome novel.I feel that it deserves more audienceit is truly a wonderful novel, one of a kind.i believe that anyone who decides to give this novel a chance after seeing this won't regret it.I don't know why I can't vote more than 3 times a day, i would have given the book all my power stones.but what a pity I can only vote with 3 power stones a day, anyways this is truly a wonderful novel.the name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

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The novel is good, minimum face slap, harem. but in the later chaps it suddenly became a cultivation world background and the women are like s#xs dolls, mc treat them as S Dolls, f there f anywhere f everywhere but everything else is good other than the later chaps

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D_Wolf
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Like all stories of this type, there are major flaws. The problem I see is the constant reality bending nature of the system that is created. If a system has to bend reality constantly then there is going to be millions of little changes occurring each time it does something. Personally I think it is better for the system just to be creating items out of nothing than go the whole reality change route. These novels can be fun for a few chapters, but those of us who like to think more deeply about things will be looking at this type of story as if there are a bunch of problems that just get more irritating as things go on.

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RaiFen33
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Why is this ranked so high up? This novel is nothing original and the MC is a terrible person. Literally gets rich and it's like it's nothing. MC is missing way too many brain cells and everywhere he goes he gets worshipped. Also the MC gets a girlfriend who had a crush on him since high-school then later on proceeds to cheat on her with multiple other women. One of the woman is a flight Attendant who he bumps into and at the end of the chapter sleeps with her when she even said herself she didn't offer herself when another rich person came before him. This is very clearly written by a misogynist who thinks women are just objects. He has twins fall for him when he stops a basketball from hitting them and they for no reason even after the MC doesn't talk to them for days turn die hard fans of him and are permanently loyal to him. Again, no reason at all. If you wanna read about a brain dead MC with other bootlicking side characters who have no other qualities other than to raise the MCs ego and materialistic cardboard cutout women who are just there to sleep with him and drive mini cooper's then go ahead and read this.

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Abhay_Bansal
Abhay_BansalLv2

it is canopied from another novel.........

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Deametryvan_Bush_5688
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i have read this before, I love the money and the skills, what I do hate is the tantananan~drum roll pls. the HAREM! guy suddenly becomes a big shot and felt like he could have the world,(he does, in future chaps maybe) he tells them he has a gf but they act like they didn't hear him, the proceed to act like brainless lovesick golddigging fools. question is, do you remember you have one(a gf?) or does she know you're not that great? just (act like) another reckless second/third gen. he got the skills, the money, but is he worth it? everything other than the harem, I love.

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Apocalypse_2ndLife
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What idiotic time skippy chapters in beginning only no proper story reason or thinking everything feels free given and free taken. No conversations about anyone else but pauper Lin, who doesn't even have the brain to think of logic behind his cheat [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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SparklyUnicorn
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