This is a different story from what we read usually on webnovel with the story being more character driven than plot driven. The POV switches between the ML and FL and shows both their emotions beautifully. For anyone wondering if they should read this book, id say yes read the book but also know full well that it will take you 30 chapters minimum to start falling in love with the characters and care about their journey so have patience. The writing quality is good, no major grammatical mistakes or spelling mistakes, however at 6chaps/week the update stability is 3 stars at best, hopefully the author works on it and improves it in the future

This author here is shameless to think that this story is worth 4 stars. I want to warn you before reading that the first few chapters may make you cringe, but that's just for now. I hope you will enjoy this story. I am still a newbie author so if you see any mistakes please point them out and I will do my best to correct them. 🌝 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋

I've read the author's previous work so I didn't even bother to skim through the synopsis I gladly flew to the first chapter. This is the first ML novel I've read to this length and I've seen immense improvement in the author's writing style. The descriptions are soooo good, I pictured myself watching it on Netflix. This is giving me pokémon vibes and as a lover of Pikachu, the hour has come to read til' this ends ✊

It's still very early on, but the potential is enormous, with already engaging and well written characters and an excellent world setting. So far, the story setup is wonderful and piqued my interest. Kali❤️ . . . . . . . . . . . . She bribed me into giving her a five-star rating.🙂

A MUST READ STORY! All in all, this is a well-written novel with a unique take on the typical isekie-system novels. I have a love-hate relationship with the ML, but at least he isn't your typical protag who is either too passive, or too dark, or too detached in the beginning chapters. He can be fairly relatable, and I am anticipating a human growth arc for him very soon. So kudos to the characters! Kali is cool as well, and even the system feels like an actual character without having any of those typical system qualities. The world-building, the story pace, the mystery elements, and everything else with beautifully woven together. In places, the language might seem a lil unpolished, but that doesn't dim the storyline at all. If you're a fan of fresh stories based on your favourite trope, I will highly recommend this :>

A different spin on how mc gets isekai’d. Realistic frustration, mc not OP yet too, which makes it fun to read and he is bit annoying but in a good way. Also I love that female lead is not afraid to express her anger to him, to mc cluelessness😂 it adds that little spice on how those two gonna work on those issues in next chapters Can’t wait to see how story develops futher.

The first chapter was kind of emotional and boring. The MC was cocky from the beginning and I was seriously waiting for him to change, but I didn't wait long. Thank you for that, author. The second chapter, although the begining jumped and didn't flow well, was a super fun and the most hooking story I have read this month. And the author's writing skill is just so good that you can't help but wanting more. The suspense was excellent and tbh, I felt his fear, although it was telling and not showing. The system is simply savage and I must give it to the author for the brilliance in coming up with such a unique system. The dragon's coming was comical and I wanted to say 'embarrassing' too, but after realizing it was a girl, I simply fell in love with how she was portrayed. Yes, her anger was justified and it made that plot real. But what ticked me off was not letting the story flow at that part I mentioned in the comment. Over all, this book has the potential to be among the best and I hope to see it up there, Jeri. You did a wonderful job and I'm impressed.

This is a must read for me! With each chapter, the story gets better and better. I don't think many other stories can compare to the uniqueness of the storyline and great execution of the world that's being built. I think the characters are done well considering they evoke an emotional response from me. I find myself cheering them on as they go through the story. I'll be reading each update from here forward!

Like the author said, 4 star at best. The novel is alright, a decent read for webnovel quality. Would I go crazy for it? Prob not, and I'll just treat this as a junk read.