Review Detail of TATchMe in Parallel Cosmos

Hello everyone, author here. I'd like to make a brief announcement that I'm planning to rewrite the entire first volume. Now that my story is a bit more established, I found the writing and the structure of the first volume is kind of lacking in quality, that's why I'm doing this. Don't worry, the plot of the story doesn't change at all, only the writing does, so you won't have to reread it. If I haven't upload any new chapters in a while, then it is very likely that I'm working exactly on this.