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CyberBlancaX
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I'd say this a good story, though the updates are a bit irregular, some parts are a bit cringe worthy(that could be fixed with a few words or if the order was changed), not really sure about character development, but so far so good. I recommend this FF. Not perfect, but not bad either. First, technically 6 chapters and it's not bad.

Is it wrong to be a Shrine Maiden Kitsune in a Dungeon?

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TempestNotion
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I'm still a novice, so my writing skill is not refined

CyberBlancaX
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Sorry if I offended you in any way, but I hope my small bit of criticism can help you on your journey to become a better writer

TempestNotion:I'm still a novice, so my writing skill is not refined