Writing quality: MTL-level Updates: idk Story Development: actions of characters make very little sense. A guy who was betrayed by others immediately trusts a random guy who saved him, even if he's extremely weird. MC immediately trusts a random guy and picks him up just so despite having to hide his nature from him. Another person suggest cannibalism when his group seems to have plenty of food still. But that's only part of it. Events happen absolutely at random with no development or anything - random encounters that begin as quickly as they and and bring little to nothing to the story. Mutants, bad survivors, sudden murder-loli - huh? I suppose she's supposed to be a miniboss (before she turns ally), but even MINIbosses are supposed to have something leading to them. And MC is supposedly has a goal, but doesn't seem purposeful in reaching it. It feels like he's just going to places at random... Character design: better than plot. Characters arent original, but at least distinctive. They arent annoying, either, and MC is someone you can even sympathize with. World Background: very barebones. Apocalypse itself is one thing, but very little said about people in it. Survivors, goverment... where did all those people went? And all that.
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