Item: Reborn as a Chaos God of Carnage
Rating: 3.4
Author: Ayden12g

Ayden12gLv41yr

2023-04-12 22:52

The story while well written is more about lemons than it is about 40k. Every chapter along with confusing perspective shifts feels like it's working up for 18+ content and not progressing with being a warp god. Also it is very similar to another story written by 'dez_burns', suspiciously similar.

Reborn as a Chaos God of Carnage

Overlord_Bloodfall

4.1

413 Chs

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