Premise is interesting and writing quality is good. sadly the MC is a pushover and with other ocs/tramigrators it gets bad... especially since he has basically no further growth after the first 30 years and basically even regressed and got weaker... even with a system and a skill like great sage.... also he forgot kinda he started as a necromancer and mage early... no usage in any kind... add in he seems more like a weaker addon for the additional trasmigrator and well.... no real future for the story sadly even so the potential was great and there...

author dropping five stars for myself shamelessly🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾.

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This is one of the most boring, unrealistic, non detailed bull shet.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

The story is good, but it's lacking in any real substance. It's also has the same problems most if not all of the author's works, which are some bad grammer and using ' ' for speak. WQ:3 SD: 3 CD:3 US:4 WB:2

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i love it. ❤️. can't wait for more...............

A white walker / other with a gamer system. and also starting at the dawn age of ASOIAF. Amazing plot point I hope you continue writing and working on this story

Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

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