please 🙏 select this novel for publishing. Don't throw this for haitus[img=update]

i think that this novel have a great potential, if it will be pick up, then we will test it and see, i hope we can test this novel :)

It sounds like a nice idea but I doubt it can be executed with a bad summary like this lol...

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Meh, too long winded. took eight chapters to do something that could easily be achieved in three. Other than that, story’s pretty good but still wont bother seeing how it develops

The translator is a little lazy and the editor (if there is one) isn't pointing out the inconsistencies. A porcupine as a boar and even is called a boar at one point but is often called a porcupine... Lots of little things like that. The author doesn't seem to know what their doing at the start and just kind of dumps stuff on us without any clear goal. Gets better though as the author seems to figure out what their trying to do. By chapter 20 the story is mostly readable and is fairly enjoyable. I question the direction of the story and suspect many undesirable choices will be made in the stories development... but unless I see that I'm hopeful that it'll turn out to be a decent story though with WebNovel's track record that hope is questionable.

raws please filler text. . . .. . . . . . ..

Me apareció aburrida, o sea tienes un mundo de cultivadores a tu espaldas pero no haces nada. Hola Hola, Hola, Hola, Hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, hola, .

Enjoyable read, I do hope that it does indeed get picked for this week’s Webnovel novel trial reads:)