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Patriarchleechlord
PatriarchleechlordLv141yr
2024-05-12 19:53

This story is just a Warhammer 40k fanfiction trying to pass itself off as an original novel. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos and we have already been introduced to the 4 gods of chaos the Brutal god (Khorne) the Filthy god (Nurgle) the god of Lust (Slaanesh) and the god of Trickery Tzeentch we even have Ancient genes (Geneseed) and the one mentioned as an example is the Fallen angel (Sanguinius). I don't hate fanfics in fact I like them but by posting this as an original novel not only does it rip off GW it also means we need to pay to unlock more chapters to read fanfiction and that's what bothers me the most but if you can look pass this fact it's not a bad story so far I just don't want to waste FP or pay for a fanfic.

A Core Ship From The Start

Xibei Cat
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1461 Chs

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Patriarchleechlord
PatriarchleechlordLv14

It's not really a book it's a war game with enough lore they made hooks out of it and the name is literally Warhammer 40k. Don't confuse it with Warhammer Age of Sigmar that's their fantasy version while 40k is the sci fi fantasy 40k meaning 40,000 year into the future. if you want some books to read from the lore I suggest the Ciaphas Cain books first to ease new readers in cause the 40k franchise is very grim dark humanity has fallen from the age of enlightenment and we are besiged from all sides by all kinds of aliens from never ending hungering bugs to Big dumb Orks that reproduce by war and can make any tech work as long as they believe it will work. Ciaphas Cain is more comedic while giving you a taste of how bad the setting is. if you want a more lore heavy then reading the Horus heresy storyline is my recommendation. Special recommendation is the Infinite and the Divine for some Xeno lore and Eisenhorn for inquisition.

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velzard_tempest
velzard_tempestLv4

thank you

Patriarchleechlord:It's not really a book it's a war game with enough lore they made hooks out of it and the name is literally Warhammer 40k. Don't confuse it with Warhammer Age of Sigmar that's their fantasy version while 40k is the sci fi fantasy 40k meaning 40,000 year into the future. if you want some books to read from the lore I suggest the Ciaphas Cain books first to ease new readers in cause the 40k franchise is very grim dark humanity has fallen from the age of enlightenment and we are besiged from all sides by all kinds of aliens from never ending hungering bugs to Big dumb Orks that reproduce by war and can make any tech work as long as they believe it will work. Ciaphas Cain is more comedic while giving you a taste of how bad the setting is. if you want a more lore heavy then reading the Horus heresy storyline is my recommendation. Special recommendation is the Infinite and the Divine for some Xeno lore and Eisenhorn for inquisition.
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PepeHasReturned
PepeHasReturnedLv13

velzard_tempest:thank you
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Patriarchleechlord
PatriarchleechlordLv14

BTW if you play video games Space Marine 2 just came out and that will show you a clear picture of what 40k has to offer.

velzard_tempest:thank you
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Heyun
HeyunLv4

please, can we have at least one space pirates novel pass through to release, please? there was one cool one about a space pirate collecting waifus but is dropped, can we have this one?

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I_Am_Death
I_Am_DeathLv15

This is a blatant rip off of Warhammer 40k. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos. We have already been introduced to the 4 Gods of Chaos which are rip offs of the 40k one i.e. Brutal God = Khorne, Filthy God = Nurgle, God of Lust = Slaanesh, and God of Trickery = Tzeentch. The author also ripped off the Warp and the Psykers, just rebranding them as Subspace and Psychics here. The translation is really good though and the story is interesting but I don't want to pay to read a fanfic.

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Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

why is it here twice???????????????????????

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D_Gaurav_Singh
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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Quite a fascinating novel, not a genre I normally read but it was in the 10min trial read and looked different so thought, give it a go. Novel is about one ugly SOB who is transmigrated into an online game. Normally it seems this guy plays a petite female character to compensate for his normal features however he appears as himself. His character class of Judge, which reminds me of the movie Judge Dredd, is a rather powerful one. Battle bad guys and fight evil, pretty much stock standard. Still it is a futuristic/fantasy based novel, so we have all the sci-fi power armor, spaceships (think they are called core ships) plus the fantasy races and skills etc. The novel holds a lot of potential and if the author/translator can keep it flowing smoothly, then I can see this being one worth keeping. Worth the read 👍

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1Kevoer
1KevoerLv13

The story is not bad, but I feel like something is missing, maybe the protagonist is motivated? In the first paragraph his actions are reasonable, but he continues to follow a path that honestly leaves me a little doubtful, what is the point of just fighting and getting stronger?

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Keerith
KeerithLv15

The writing is good and the characters are amusing, but it's a self insert Warhammer 40K fanfic with a lot of crossovers into other IPs (WH Fantasy, Skyrim, Destiny, Doom).

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Misael_8_
Misael_8_Lv13

Reveal spoiler

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PepeHasReturned
PepeHasReturnedLv13

Games workshop is going to touch you if you dont mark this as fan fiction

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