Review Detail of Ppp_Pppp in Reborn in attack on titan as a bender
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No_One_1398:Hire an editor or use grammarly, your grammar is terrible. Most people who attended at least the primary school(in Europe) will find this unreadable. I think everyone who has at least B1+ will tell you it is unreadable(I don’t know if it is true, I have C1, so my critisism may be over exaderated).
Shub_Niggurath:It is overexaggerated, but true , i too Have C1. But still, his grammar is indeed horrible.
AlmightyMAX:you've got this just u drama and have the fight scenes more detailed
you've improved a lot all that's missing now is the confrontation between Historia & Mc I personally believe that he shouldn't forgive her right away for ghosting him she has to earn forgiveness have Mikasa tell Kristia to "leave him alone because he friend's with Historia not Kristia and have her them get in a fight or something then it escalates blah blah blah blah
AlmightyMAX:you've improved a lot all that's missing now is the confrontation between Historia & Mc I personally believe that he shouldn't forgive her right away for ghosting him she has to earn forgiveness have Mikasa tell Kristia to "leave him alone because he friend's with Historia not Kristia and have her them get in a fight or something then it escalates blah blah blah blah
That was a rush decision I originally plan to make them have kids and them live out a full life and the king just snoop in and just kidnap the kids after their death but that was a bit longer and I had an exam coming up meaning I didn't hae much time on I wrote that monstrosity
PrideAndLust:autor, porque hacer que Ymir le haga ntr al mc? no podía simplemente hacer que el mc tanga hijos con Ymir y que el rey lo secuestrara o algo así, el ntr en los fics es lo peor
No idea what the grading system you are talking about is. But I find that the higher a persons understanding of english, the easier it is to know what people mean, even if they use horrendously bad grammar.
No_One_1398:Hire an editor or use grammarly, your grammar is terrible. Most people who attended at least the primary school(in Europe) will find this unreadable. I think everyone who has at least B1+ will tell you it is unreadable(I don’t know if it is true, I have C1, so my critisism may be over exaderated).
The grading system is a person’s knowledge of English. It starts with A1 and ends at C2 or D. And although your understanding may increase, so does your irritation. It is annoying to read, and therefore ‘unreadable’.
TrueImmortalDevil:No idea what the grading system you are talking about is. But I find that the higher a persons understanding of english, the easier it is to know what people mean, even if they use horrendously bad grammar.
Nah, reading mtl has made it so i autocorrect everything while reading... I dont see faults, unless I want to.
No_One_1398:The grading system is a person’s knowledge of English. It starts with A1 and ends at C2 or D. And although your understanding may increase, so does your irritation. It is annoying to read, and therefore ‘unreadable’.
So, you could read a ‘story’ where the protagonist changes genders in almost every sentence, the spellings are mostly wrong, most of the grammar is incorrect and interpunction is basically nonexistent?
TrueImmortalDevil:Nah, reading mtl has made it so i autocorrect everything while reading... I dont see faults, unless I want to.