The people praising this are doing the author a disservice, you need to improve your grammar and spelling. Basic words are spelled wrong and incorrect words are used constantly. The idea for this story is really interesting, but ultimately the writing makes it a chore to read and not worth the headache.

Author-san, you really need to work on your grammar. I would understand if the first few chapters of your first fanfic was infested with horrible grammatical errors...but it is inexcusable for your more recent fanfics to still have this level of grammar. I'm sure you've heard this before but clearly nothing has changed. It probably doesn't matter to you, but know that today you lost a fan because you couldn't be bothered to form coherent sentences for your stories.

Pretty amazing work man it's hard to believe you are the same author that created the Zeus one's starting chapters love it 👏👏👏💗💗💗💗💗💗🫡🫡❤️❤️❤️😺😺

Seeing Darksied immediately had me wanting to read this but wow this is like reading a machine translated novel or worse hope the author improves the quality to make it readable

grammar is absolutely atrocious. words are completely wrong. for example using the word description instead of destruction ect... barley any punctuation. no commas. sentence structure is abysmal.

My Own refine and batter work hope you will like It I think it's pretty good but if find some problems with it please comment on it but don't give about how bad my English is

The idea was pretty cool and thiswould’ve been such a good read if you actually pulled it off. There’ s A LOT of grammar mistakes and like another reviewer said, ”it feels like it’s MTL.” which I agree with 💯 I sincerely hope the author improves his grammar and his overall level of English since then I feel like he would be able to beautifully write down his ideas and his concepts Best of luck and I sincerely wish for the best 🤞 -Monkey

The story has a great concept however the grammer is terrible it makes it very hard to follow along with the story and the plot

The sentence construction is really bad. I would have been ok if its just the grammar as long as its readable. I mean I've been use to reading machine translated novel for a while now and personally English is like my 3rd language so its abit understandable why the paragraphs are like that. But this is just terrible. I could see the authors love and drive as they wrote this. You could see how he likes the characters and has deep knowledge of each characters personality and such. Its the only thing that is keeping me from dropping this and ofcourse our lord savior Darkseid. But you have to admit grammar, sentence construction. How each characters conversation goes is really bad. I would suggest you get a proof reader or use grammarly or ask anyone from your discord to help you with the fanfic you are writing.