Let's start with writing quality, yeah? The author has good command over the language and you can see that in the simplicity of the writing quality. Grammar is good (that's always a plus) with few to no typo. Although I did find the transition from 3rd person pov to 1st a little offsetting but everything good aside that. The actions scenes are, in my opinion, very well written. Story development and world building is great. Some people like the info dumps are the start some don't, personally, I think the info dumps were short enough to hit the sweet spot. Ahhh, the characters (aside from the main character) are very... how do I put it? Plain? They don't feel very real (especially Ashley. Maybe it's really me since I don't like 'damsel in distress' kind of girls.) I like the mc (Servarin or Sevrian or however you call his name TwT!) tho. He's exactly what you would imagine a system novel mc to be like and more. His system is op (not too op to make the story feel bland but not too weak to be a disgrace to the system tag either). All in all, there's nothing to criticize or complain about. It's a light and entertaining read for system lovers such as myself so go ahead and read da book👀
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