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Review Detail of BookWorms007 in Herald of Steel

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This novel had huge potential . But sadly, the author failed to keep the readers entertained. Let me explain.The first 10 chapters just describes a war between 2 nations . The MC is present only in 2 of those chapters .The author wants us to remember and sympathise with characters that we as readers have no prior exposure to. It simply feels as reading a war log. The author gives much unnecessary importance in fights that the MC has no direct participation in. The author should have read tyranny of steel to draw inspiration on how to keep the readers entertained . Also, the novel is too damn slow. It takes about 70 chapters for the MC to be free of his slave status (let alone controlling an army). I can't imagine the number of chapters that would be necessary for the MC to reach the position of a king. I don't have enough patience to wait for all those chapters. I came here hoping to see kingdom building and engaging in battles between nations ( for that to happen, the MC should be the king obviously ) . Also, the MC is a Simp to his harem members which is another let down. This novel would have been much better if the author had focused more on MC himself rather than all those unnecessary battles / schemes at the start..... I am out of this novel. Far too boring in my opinion.

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