Review Detail of MrDotman_Sr in Herald of Steel

so far where I'm at into the story, you introduced too many characters without fleshing out the Mc himself enough. Mc just pulls out technological innovations out of his behind and nobody questions him twice, nobody believes the reason he knows all this knowledge but they just don't care how he knows it. the way Octavius's character was created seemed lazy, for instance when his sister was laughing about his death I was wowed, but then it was like oh did you know he was a piece of garbage blah blah blah, I just felt that every single character up till chapter 16 is 2d. there are some writing mistakes but I think they lessened as the story progressed. overall I still enjoyed reading this story but these things added up for me. My bad if I rambled a little In this, anyway if you did or didn't read all that have an amazing day!!!