Review Detail of TeeGeN in THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)

Item: THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)
Rating: 3.4

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TeeGeNLv41yrTeeGeN

Eh, i kinda expected more. An interesting oc mc with suffering in backstory, hollow evolution patchway after which he basiclly becomes a spectator to bleach cannon. IDK why author wants to keep ccannon intact this much, but it IS way too rigid. Its like reading bbleach rom diffre t pov with random remarks about said pov. Try to innnovate, add/edit events aside from just trhoeing mc there Also, good grammar, keep it up.

THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)

Sphire1707

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Sphire1707AuthorSphire1707

It's only until he get's the hogyoku though and him interfering too much now may stop the hollow from being fully completed.(merging urahara's hogyoku and aizen's hogyoku, then finishing touch from orihime)

1yr

Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

How would he even get them anyway? Just seems stupid, the MC Should already be OP without it

Sphire1707:It's only until he get's the hogyoku though and him interfering too much now may stop the hollow from being fully completed.(merging urahara's hogyoku and aizen's hogyoku, then finishing touch from orihime)

1yr