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2022-09-27 11:31

This is a good series worth checking out I like the way it references naruto and bleach in the action 🔥 However the overall story, dialogue and pacing can be improved to make it more engaging Overall its a good series 👌

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Sphire1707Author

There is a major problem I have with some readers. They didn't even read past the first 10 chapters and you're already complaining about how it's not even a bleach fan fic. In the end your review or comment is just based off the slow first 10 chapters and very biased instead of the whole story. It's like you telling me that you think pineapple is a terrible fruit after only eating the outside covering. People just leaving hate comments and reviews without reading the whole book is very annoying, I'm not being paid to write and yes this is my first book so it obviously can't be on the same level as a lot of others, but I take out of the little time I have to write a fan fiction and people don't even finish reading before leaving hate comments and reviews after only the slow parts at the beginning. This is very disheartening as a lot of good books are dropped because of hateful readers. As a new writer, I have obviously been paying attention to your comments, so I can better my writing skills, but a lot of people are not willing to read past the first few chapters where I didn't know much and wrote how I knew to. Please do continue to make comments to help me better my writing skills but, please do not leave a review without at least reading to the latest chapter available. I'd rather have no ratings than to see reviews that are obviously not true about my story and NO, I will not delete the bad reviews. You're welcome to make a more correct review after actually reading my book and not just skimming through it. Thank you for listening to my ranting.

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