Review Detail of ThugB in MMORPG: Evolution: A new game

Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order... One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times. Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :] The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!