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MsShei29
MsShei29Lv132yr
2023-01-13 23:18

What is the goal of this story? What is the climax? Because as of this writing (Chapter 128), I don't see any significant events. It focuses on their daily life, cooking, going out, Du Yue being clean, gets targeted on, that Du Yue is such a "perceptive" person and would kill anyone who disturbs her peace. The beginning was fun, exciting and looked promising but the middle part just became stagnant for a long time now. No new event or arc is being introduced. I don't know. Maybe you have different ideas but this is not going well IMO.

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Newbie165
Newbie165Lv4

same here

Alyssa_Bucio
Alyssa_BucioLv15

it's a series of small arcs with the daily stuff in between....it does get boring and predictable at times but it's still has some interesting parts....

NispedanaSan
NispedanaSanLv13

If you like slice of life in the Apocalypse, this is a bit fun

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