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free_life
free_lifeLv52yr
2022-09-26 18:23

the translation is bad, the world background is bad even if you consider it an AU it's still bad : for the first 30 chapters the only thing note worthy happening is that the MC kept using money. there is no depth to interactions it made feel the relationships are superficial. from a nobody the MC became starks friend and confidant even though they only met at most 5 times ???!!!! couldn't continue reading its so frustrating !!

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Deimesu
DeimesuLv4

Thank you for saving my time.

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Meatloaf_Man
Meatloaf_ManLv3

thank you for giving us a synopsis

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Error_007
Error_007Lv4

Thanks for saving my time 😊

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alex_Valhalla
alex_ValhallaLv3

thanks

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AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

gracias me salvaste

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Marcia_05
Marcia_05Lv12

First of all, the translation is bad, well not entirely, but there are things that are tiring and annoying to read, especially in the case of the names, second; the growth of the MC is a bit rushed and I would even say it's ridiculous since the author doesn't explore well the interaction with the other characters, making the story a bit empty, although what bothers me the most and I think that if you read this it will also bother you, is the evident racism in each chapter, which makes me think that the author is Chinese; I don't have proof but I don't have any doubt, so it's up to you if you want to read it.

1yr

Bookcultivater
BookcultivaterLv4

if it a had a description I'd give it a read but there is non and I hate that

1yr
GuDaoistBigbro
GuDaoistBigbroLv14

its ok, it doesn't get better but its understandable if you know beginner english. but what can i say, its china again.

2yr
Fraisier
FraisierLv5

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2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Chinese story and MC [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
CrisTDF
CrisTDFLv4

I quit... how can it be that you have so many translation errors?... even for me, a Spanish-speaking person, it is impossible for me to read this book due to the many translation errors... it is noticeable that the translator did not put the minimum effort to do a good job with translation errors. By the way... I read this up to ch 319 and the quality of the translation only gets worse.

1yr
Celectra
CelectraLv4

I don't get it. What Happened to Maria Hill and Him? Why is he suddenly getting it on with Daisy? Didn't he said he was going to wait for her, if she still didn't want to get into a commitment relationship then he can move on...

1yr
konan_slayer99
konan_slayer99Lv4

The writing is bad ,the words don't make sense, written by a child plot don't make sense, system suck and cringe , trash trash trash trash trash trash trash

2yr
BrazilNani
BrazilNaniLv1

Very Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......................................................................................................................

2yr
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