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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv141yr
2023-01-23 12:28

This story has more potential than it is utilizing. It's a great concept but nothing is being developed. what the system is capable of and why he is devoting effort to it isn't properly explained. Mind you this is a review only based on content I currently have available to me. It jumps into simulations that he has 0 input on for the most part with seemingly random exceptions. The growth of the world is not explained well and might as well be jibberish with little to no real breakdown in the evolution of the world. This is not a review about this being a bad novel even though it sounds that way it has potential but was taken out of the oven to soon and is still a little raw.

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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

Agreed. The author has so many ways to develop the novel but just tells us, then expects us to accept it and then focuses on normal faceslap clichés in more detail. I stopped reading after that

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