Review Detail of Koi_Stadt in Hatch Forth and Grow

I will keep this shameless author review honest. I am a writer who is only now starting to post my work online. I am writing this so other people can see this and hear from me the author and my opinions on this. First of all, I would like to explain, my character the raptor, she lives in a world of magic and systems. Death is common and life is rapid. I expect to make the action parts stressful and the calm part calming. If you ever feel excitement of a paragraph, I am happy. I have only heard from a couple friends and I still don't hold to much hope for my story. Bellow is one of the first images I planned on using for my novel. I had chosen the other which you can see on the cover above.