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Lord_Anso
Lord_AnsoLv12yr
2022-11-17 13:34

I read your story, It's good but, you need to enhance your English skill, it's readable and the story is good so far, I hope you don't drop this[img=update]

Sorcerer King with Dimensional Group Chat [Re-write]

Mr_Chocolate
4.0
14 Chs

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_JMR_Lv14

It might be a good idea, but i can't be really sure , cause the grammar is really bad... like really bad. I couldn't make it past the first chapter.

2yr

Ozy_ox
Ozy_oxLv14

Great story. Love the reincarnated sorcerer theme because one if my favorite manwha is I am the sorcerer king. I like the OC characters because it gives the story its uniqueness unlike other stories where we get the same old girls from orher stories dating the mc. Thank you author!!!

2yr
MochiKng97
MochiKng97Lv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Mr_Chocolate
Mr_ChocolateAuthor

Hello everyone i am the author of this story. And for sure i will give the best review πŸ˜‰. I hope you will like this book, also i am not good at English so if you ever read some problem you can comment then i will edit it ☺️.

2yr
A_Monkey_Reading
A_Monkey_ReadingLv1

it's fun. even though it is sometimes repeated, just like part of the original! I still liked it.

2yr
Fellow_Daoist_John
Fellow_Daoist_JohnLv2

If the iterations and personalities of the characters improve, you may read it again. The dialogues feel empty and seem to copy and paste. All that's left is for the MC to say "I know your future" and ruin the whole story with clichΓ©s.

1yr
I_HATE_INCENT_01
I_HATE_INCENT_01Lv5

It's amazing. ....it's been a while since I actually saw a Dimensional chat story with powerful and mature characters. .........pls don't drop

1yr
ArgonautLifeLine
ArgonautLifeLineLv14

world background is decent character design is average at best story development is also decent writing quality is bad the writing it self is understandable but it is not something that i want to read regularly even if the story is amazing if the writing quality is bad its gonna turn a lot of people away. although i encourage the author to write more and maybe try some free spell checking software its gonna help with the writing quality. thanks for writing the book and i wish the author good luck on their next endeavor

1yr
samsara
samsaraLv5

I want to read it and I tried reading it but a pity why good story has to have an harem in it. I feel devastated but my dislike for harem can't be overcome on how good of such writing quality

2yr
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