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Emmanuel_Enemona
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2022-10-03 14:10

A very attractive and captivating story I enjoyed every chapter. indeed the writer did a great job, keep it up author. I can't wait to finish the book.

THE ALPHA'S DAUGHTER (MYSTERIOUS WARD)

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DaoistStDV7U
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Good plot actually. Just a little more polishing and it will shine like a gem. Get someone to edit and proof read your work. It will make a huge difference. Upcoming authors like us need to buckle up .

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Starry_Josty
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keep it up with the good work 👏 Nice work Author.. just a flash.'how crazy I am '."Huhhhh!!!!.. Werewolf stories makes me feel wholly it's a must read

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Emily11
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Here's my point of view. it has a nice writing quality but I'm still trying to get the hang of the characters. Aside from that, it looks amazing.

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Precious_Attah_7041
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Beautiful and captivating, I must say this is one of my favorites werewolf book. The synopsis is quite catchy. The plot entails alluring sceneries. keep it up author.

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PHOENIX_GOD_5600
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The plot is very good and is alluring enough for readers but it needs more content. It should be more descriptive and detailed. Apart from that, the story is great and has a good potential. Keep it up author.

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