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2022-09-25 00:52

17 chapters in and it’s a great start. Character development between the MC and FMC is growing slowly but surely. This book is written and edited by the author, it’s very easy to understand the writing, nothing too complex but just the way you’d like it. World building is probably coming along, we’re just 17 chapters in so it’s a bit early to point out stuff however, I’d say give this book a try since it has a familiar yet unique and new plot you might have not seen before. 👍👍

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Initially, I hated this novel and wanted to drop it, but I kept reading and when I reached 77, it became my favorite. And I can say now that this is one of the best Harem + Romance novels I have read, but this novel is also packed with good actions and fun adventures. Pros: The five main girls are all unique in their own way. + Nyla is a yandere whom you will start liking around chapter 90. + Helia hates humans and you might end up disliking her from start but as the story progresses her character becomes more likable. + Lia is the ideal wife one can have, you will fall in love with her but at the start, she gives cold shoulders to MC which may annoy you, but hold onto it until the 50 chapters. As the author mentioned, he doesn't do force development and has given some chapters to develop their relationship in a natural way. + Layla is a mystery even until the current chapters I have read. But She is the number one girl and she will become your most favorite girl even though she doesn't have much screen time until now but you will understand why as you read. + Let's talk about the main character, he is naive at first and acts in an easy pushover way at the start but when you pass the 77 chapters you will get to see his real side, a cold one, really awesome. That's also the chapter where it will make this novel your favorite. However, if you're a new novel reader then this novel is not for you. Because Most good novel takes the first 100 chapters to become good and it's the same as this one. It is for those who could endure the past 77 chapters. But I promise you that reading until 77 chapters will give you goosebumps, The best plot twist one can imagine and I got to understand everything after that. Cons: The only thing I don't like about this novel is that it doesn't have two thousand plus chapters and this book doesn't get much support because most people drop it before reading past the 40 chapters. Give it a chance, it's intriguing where this story will go with all the mystery and girls. I hope this book gets all the support so we can get to have a good happy ride.

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