I have to say that I am enjoying it so far. The grammar is good with a few mistakes here or there, but they are manageable. The character is nice, I am interested to find out more about him. I hope you are able to keep up your updating schedule, or if not at this speed, at least remain consistent. I appreciate that you removed the character sheet that would spoil your character's development. Maybe create a basic character sheet at the end of each arc with the new developments. Curious that you added a kengan ashura character into the HxH universe. Really interested to see how this character develops with this fighting style.
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