The story has an interesting premise nd the background is good but didn't like all the heavy focus on cultivation elements. The mc doing some seriously sketchy logic defying things ignoring biology as a whole just turned me off and it just felt at some point a mishmash of powers and theories loosely held by sketchy logic but overall a good novel just not for me good luck author.

I don't mind references to Chinese cultivation novels (I usually read them), but from volume 2 it stopped being "naruto" and became a Chinese cultivation novel, only replacing internal energy with chakra and even for me it's too much Xianxia or Xuanhuan, I came to read "naruto", not a cultivation novel. (I just want to know how things will develop in the world of naruto) google translate.

It’s an interesting premise held down by the authors painful lack of originality, any time there comes a design in anything it is simply copied in every single aspect without any of the originality, breathing techniques but the mc doesn’t make any unique final techniques, domain expansion but without anything in the domain, it’s a cultivation style domain but with expansion tacked on as a way to remind the reader the author could not think of a unique domain for their mc, he creates a dojutsu which was interesting but in the story it is someone accentuated that the mc takes pride in not being an otsutsuki and that humans can rival them, what does the dojutsu look like? Indra otsutsuki’s EMS. The story is salvageable, but I would be extremely surprised if it ever is, who wishes to exist in a universe where people can impart their will character and personality in some form on the world and think “I want that but an exact copy of someone else”

Very enjoyable to read, it is not amazing but it is a solid read. I look forward to seeing how the MC develops his skillset and hopefully how he helps shape the world as time goes by. Author will also likely continue to improve as they write. worth following.

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"I'm saying this for those that will write a 1-Star review for me. I'll delete the review. Period." Say less. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------

Warning: please read the fanfic yourself if you want to know whether you would like it or not. I don’t actually hate the story, because I’ve never read it. What irked me to the point of leaving a one star review anyway was because of something sh*tty the author said in the synopsis. ‘This is for those who will write a one star review for me. I will delete this review. Period.’ Which makes me believe they would even delete one star reviews with constructive criticism and good reasons on why they view it as one star. So I’m just returning sh*ttiness with sh*ttiness, really not the mature thing to do but I’m doing it anyway.

For those who are expecting Naruto, read only the first volume, after that it's just another cultivation novel. 2 Stars because of Update stability, nothing else

The story had potential, but it has been wasted. the best way to explain this is if you like Chinese power fantasy novels (God bless your soul) you would like this. Writing quality: a lot of mistakes but readable. Story development: starts well but later it drags on instead of skipping to a different age where something interesting happens. Character designs: character designs are decent because it's from Naruto but when start going off it becomes a Chinese novel. Update stability: it updates frequently which is good if you like the story. World background: if the world of Naruto before the ninja stuff happens but the author has the bad luck of liking Chinese novels even the bad parts. so in the end, if you like Chinese fanfic novels you would enjoy this story, but in the end,d characters and the story is not original but they did well if it was to copy Chinese novels.