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Rosmu
RosmuLv152yr
2023-01-24 19:54

I like that these movements and descriptions in over all 'paint the clear picture'. It's easy enough to follow. 😊 And this story has descriptions of many things: Sights, feelings, thoughts, inner demons, having a hard time with own morals because of a situation at the hand. Sometimes offering descriptions even about things that would otherwise be 'obvious' for most of people. Like the feeling of greenery, an oasis, how someone might view these things when seeing them for a first time. There's a good amount of comical moments as well. So far loving the humor. 🤣 Also, I can't help but notice that at those parts in which Amon interacts with the baby... And how the baby acts. It seems like it's done with great perception, very much like it could be from real life-like moments. 😊 Big + for that! They're so heartwarming! I've a feeling that author has the very least some sort of experience of babies. 😄

Elusive Miracle

Metztli_Night
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163 Chs

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Thank you so much for your review! It's extremely encouraging and I will continue to do my best!

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Nice story. Keep up the good work. First few chapters made me intrigued and waiting for the updates. Fantasy romance is my favourite genre and this is the first time I am reading a story about elves which is totally worth it..👍

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Metztli_Night
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Chapter 20 seems like a good time to do a shameless review by me the author. So far the my writing skills are able to roughly convey each chapter's theme. The plotline and ending has already been roughly written, just have to write the actual scenes out and figure out the side characters backstories. Oh, right. FYI I'm obsessed with the colour blue. Good luck with that. Those who also love the colour. Hi five!

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This is nice, it was well written, the explanation of the background was nice too. The plot was interesting. The storytelling was great. Keep it up.

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This is one of beautiful story, I think, yeah. With a very precise and perfect explanation, as well as a very cool plot and so on. Well, I like it, really

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Though it was short, which was perfect for me to have a good head start I really loved it. The detailed description, the action and how you were able to make your world and names up which I'd not easy in fantasy. You have a good work and I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.

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The plot is dramatic and unique. Easy to be swept up in the emotions and scenes. The characters are very sweet and cute. It's developing well with time and the writing style has a beat and rhyme to it in certain parts like reading the Lorax. Hope to be reading more from you!

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beautiful story ,the plot and the details of the story was just perfect. Very interesting story that draws the reader within just the first chapter through its description and slightly rhythm way of writing. Love how the character interact with each other and can't wait for more chapters.

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